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Uncharted Drake's Fortune: The Legend Of Atlantis

I got this game quite recently and I love it I shoulda listened to Xeall and got it when it first came out, but I forgot as I sometimes do so meh. I have it now and thats all that matters.

I absolutly love this game, Im currently playing it through on crushing and it is haaaaaaard!!!!!!!!!!!! Im on the fight in the custom's house bleh.

Anyway I decided to write an original story or fanfiction for it so here it is my original story.

The Legend Of Atlantis.

All Uncharted characters (C) Naughty Dog

All orginal characters (C) to me ^^
Kikari

Prologue
Kikari

Prologue

The midday sun beamed down from a clear blue sky highlighting the green canopy of the tree tops with a golden glow, tropical birds could be heard chattering and calling as they sat within the branches. A low throaty warbling call silenced them briefly as the birds assessed whether the animal that had made the noise was a danger to them, before carrying on chattering and squabbling over fruit and nuts.

Down below the canopy it was humid and damp the sun rarely got through the lush roof of green tree tops but here and there shafts of light could be seen strafing the ground. A small stream wended its way through this part of the jungle, burbling its way over small river rocks towards a little waterfall.

A small monkey sat at the waters edge playing with one of the smooth stones examining it nimbly with clever fingers. It raised it to its nose and sniffed before giving it a small lick. No food item this but the monkey was content.

Suddenly it stopped moving and became as still as the rock it held, something wasn’t right, even the birds had gone silent. Without warning the bushes behind the small mammal began rustling violently. The monkey’s nerve gave and it sprang away still clutching its pebble.

A tall figure fell through the bushes and lay where it fell panting hard, above him the birds screamed and fluttered about. Ignoring them the man just lay there trying to catch his breath. After a while the screeching and squawking subsided somewhat and finally the man sat up.

Running a hand through his thick black hair he reached down and fingered a small silver ring that hung from his neck on a piece of leather cord. Looking down at himself he sighed. His shirt which had been white and clean at the start of this little trip was now stained with dirt, grime and here and there splatters of blood.

Reaching to his side the man pulled a handgun from the holster there and ejected the clip to check the ammo remaining it did not look promising. Twenty bullets in all remaining and he still had a way to go until he reached the rendezvous spot where Sully was waiting for him.

Placing the firearm back into the holster, he took a fleeting glance around his surroundings, spotting the stream he grinned and crawled over to it not daring to stand in case one of his pursuers spotted him. Reaching the water he thrust his hands into the clear water and raised it to his mouth. Deciding it was one of the most delicious things he had tasted in a while he continued to scoop the water into his mouth.

He froze suddenly as he heard the crack of a fallen twig nearby, silently he eased his own weapon back out of its holster. Quietly he turned and sighed.

“Ahh hell.”


Facing him weapons drawn were several men each with a look of greed on their faces. Their leader a tall thin man stepped forward holding his own gun on him.

“Good afternoon Drake.”

One of his goons stepped forward his weapon trained between Drakes eyes, reaching to Nate’s side the hired thug pulled the gun from the holster and backed off now holding both weapons.

Their boss smiled thinly and held out his hand. Nate looked at it and smiled.

“I guess there’s no point in saying I’d rather not hand this over to you then?”

Reaching into his pocket he pulled out a large emerald, it glinted as a small shaft of sunlight caught it. His adversary smiled as he beheld it and reached to take it from the younger man. Nate smiled and pulled back gripping the jewel tight in his fingers.

“Uh uh uh, you know you don’t get something for nothing I…”

He stopped as a collective sound of cocking guns rang around the clearing; the thin man in front of him let the grin slide from his face as he gestured toward the gemstone.

“How about I just kill you and take it?”

Nate blinked and smiled easily and raised his free hand in a submissive gesture.

“Easy lets not do anything stupid, here take it.”

Before they could do anything Nate pulled back his arm and threw the jewel as hard as he could, not sticking around to see where it landed he dashed off crashing through the bushes and ferns as a hail of bullets suddenly began thundering past him. Inwardly he cursed; that gem had been a pain in the ass to get a hold of and now he had lost it.

Still he though to himself as he ran at least I’m still alive a tree to his left suddenly splintered as bullet fire hit it causing Nate to run faster. You won’t be alive if you keep letting your mind wander pay attention dammit he thought to himself angrily.

Xxx

Victor Sullivan leaned back against the base of his new plane, it had cost him a fair amount but with the loot he had brought back from that little escapade looking for El Dorado it hadn’t bothered him too much. Looking across the still water he had landed the vehicle on he wondered how much longer the kid was going to be.

He sniggered suddenly a thought rising in his mind that Nate had probably bitten off more than he could chew and was probably in trouble. His snigger became a laugh.

“Great now I’m getting paranoid.”

His mirth was cut short as from somewhere nearby he heard the unmistakable sound of an automatic weapon going off. Standing he shook his head in despair obviously he wasn’t as paranoid as he thought. Moving quickly Sully pulled open the door to the interior and stepped inside, moving past the seats up to the cockpit he sat quickly into the pilots chair and began prepping the engine for take off. Hitting several switches he felt the machine come to life around him.

“You better make it here alive kid or I’m going to kill you”.

Xxx

The kid in question was still running for his life, sweat ran down his face and back as he sprinted through the lush landscape, had he not have been trying to stay alive and not die in a hail of bullets he might have admired the beautiful surroundings. As it was though his pursuers seemed to be gaining, Nate threw more energy into running a small thought running through his mind asking how much further it was.

Suddenly the jungle ended and he skidded on the wet grass near the river, floating on top propellers spinning and engines humming, Sully’s plane sat looking at this moment more inviting than it ever had. Inside the cockpit he could make out his older companion gesturing wildly to him, Nate needed no further urging he could his followers shouting behind him.

Scurrying along the bank he threw himself into the water and swam for the edge of the plane, reaching it he hauled himself up and threw himself inside shouting as he did.

“SULLY GET US OUTTA HERE NOW!”

Sully chuckled and moved controls, the plane rotated almost a full circle and began heading up river. From the window he saw several men emerged onto the bank Nate had just left. Shouting and gesturing they could only stand and watch as the plane gathered speed on it way upriver and finally took off.

Xxx

Still breathing hard Nate finally made his way to the cockpit where Sully sat a wide grin on his face and a cigar in his mouth. Silently Nate slumped into the co-pilots chair and sat there breathing deeply of the processed air, beside him his friend chuckled.

“You certainly have a way with people kid.”

Nate eyed him.

“Ahh you know me Sully.”

Sullivan chuckled, “yeah but I’m not so sure that’s a good thing sometimes."
Kikari

Chapter 1


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